any thoughts,comments,concerns,adjustments are welcome

just ask if you do not know what card are you looking for in the picture

and yes i am looking another spot for evilswarm exciton knight and another veiler and second trap stun but debating if i should replace star chart as well

PS: this is only a beta version of a prototype deck
PSS: Deck updated 2/9/2013 

-1 star constellar
+1 bunilla

you and your vanilla flavors

not really the expert but here are my suggestions anyway..

-1 veiler
-1 stun

+2 safe zones or 1 zone,1 vanity.

and if you like star chart:
-2 mirror force
+2 xyz reborn/coth

if not
-3 star chart
+1 mst
+1 xyz reborn
+1 fiendish or star cradle [preference]

side cards to consider:
Gozen match
consecrated light
imperial iron wall
DNA surgery
Mistake

extra:
-1 pleiades
-1 double attacks r5
-1 maestroke

+1 exciton
+1 r3 constellar [doesn't target making it great vs bujins/FF and decks that spam beaters with low def]
+abyss dweller

yeah i run star chart since maxx "c" isnt suitable this format.. and double atk r5 (shark fortress) helped me finish alot of games fast and maestroke on the other hand just sits there, cowboy allows me to hit 800 lp when needed to.



now im looking for a space for xyz reborn thanks to the help of Loudfist.

Deck has been updated due to various test

Hello Rai,
Looking at your current build, it looks really promising and effective. Of course I'd personally change stuff since not everyone got same preference in things but I must note to you something here about your side deck; your current cards in there aren't really fitting that much, for instant mirror force sided isn't a good choice, Dweller in side is painful to see, main that bitch in extra it stops Mermails and bujins or any grave deck. Now you'll say no space but look at your extra deck and think; there are cards that you don't really need anymore considering the release of 101 and swarm Soooo for example that R3 loudfist suggested isn't needed, Paladynamo isn't that much needed. You need to consider what things to replace for better things.

Consider maiming xyz reborn of you're running the constellars drawing spell, Pluses you bro.

As for now, this is what I could notice, but you're going for a really solid build there, keep up the good work .