sigh MA...
Anyway lol
Simtem's Test Results
Match Full Score ((41/75))
Match (lost)x-x-NA [0/25]
Deck Construction [20/25 ())
Count 5/5
Performance 4/5
Consistency & Synergy 4/5
Creativity 3/5
Sophistication 4/5
Well... for hand traps I suggest running veiler since you are not running any. Take out the random beckoning light and 1 POD for 2 trags. Either take out 2 mirrors or 2 prisons and 1 mst for 3 lances. Add RDA jeweled on your extra after taking out photon papil. Other than that it seems like a good deck overall.
Performance [21/25]
Well although your bottomless had a good timing, you waited for too long with book of moon which did cost you a huge amount of your resource to make a comeback. Then you couldn't do anything to my Gawayn and I took over the game.
Round 2 was a slow painful beat down by me. You couldn't do much because of the lack of monsters in your hand, that is why you should take out beckoning light and some of the other cards.
Single Duel Full Score ((14/25))
Single (loss) [0/5]
Deck Construction (Mermail) [10/15]
First thing in your deck that I can't see is dark hole, although your deck is a combo deck, I think dark hole can go in most of the decks. Also I suggest running 1 salvage for recycling. I don't think lance is the best card for using when you have other cards that you rather run. Again I suggest 2 veilers over breakthrough skills and 1 more card. Alucard, lavalval, sea dragon are not really needed instead I suggest running second bahamut shark and 2 full armoured - black ray lancer.
Performance [4/5]
Attitude ((2/2))
Game points = 56
Total + attitude = 57/102
You will be put in Slifer for now, I know you can make it to RA.
Subject: Simtem Test Up {Pyro} 
